“Hi, My Name Is…”

After Valerie’s last blog post about how to create a powerful conclusion, I thought, “What about the introduction??”

One of the most challenging parts of an effective speech is the introduction. Most of the time, we forget that the audience needs to be captured before we start presenting our content. We forget that, “Hi, my name is Erin and today I will be talking to you about…” does NOT capture the attention of your audience. Why do we forget this? Because it’s easier to start out with “Hi, my name is…” than finding an appropriate attention grabber!

The best piece of  advice I have gotten about this specific topic is, “We have been in class with you the entire semester… we’ve worked together… we know your name!!” Most of the time in your COMM 131 classes, you all know one another by the time you get up to give a speech. Or even if you are in an upper-level class, you know most of the people from having classes with them before. Surprise! The attention grabber at the beginning of your speech does not mean telling the audience something they already know! By starting with “Hi, my name is” you already lose the attention of your audience before you start.

So, you’re probably asking, “Okay, so how do I start my speech?” There are a ton of different ways! The most effective ways to catch your audience’s attention is through a startling statistic, a personal anecdote that leads the listener to the point you are making, a rhetorical question that gets the audience really thinking, a powerful quote, the use of humor or sarcasm (only use this if you know you will get a reaction from your audience), a progression of pictures and explanation of their story or situation, and so much more! This way, you will not only grab your audience’s attention, but you’ll make them feel like what you are going to say is important AND powerful. Try it. You’d be surprised at the reaction your peers and professor have to an introduction like this!

Check out the article: “7 Memorable Ways To Open a Speech Presentation” under our Helpful Articles and Resources for more effective attention grabbers.

Check out our Quick Tip sheet about Introductions as well for some more help on introductions.

Are you really struggling with your introduction, especially coming up with an attention grabber? Make an appointment with the PCC and we can help you craft one!!

Turning “Passion” Into “Purpose”

A lot of the time when I have a mentoring session with a student who needs help with topic selection, I hear them say, “I want to speak about something I am really passionate about.” Or even from other peers and classmates, we hear “just pick something you’re passionate about.” But, what does this really mean? Sure, I am “passionate” about animals, but how can I talk about that in a speech?

Usually this advice, to pick something you are passionate about, is not enough for some students and leads to more confusion than clarity. Some students begin to write about their favorite sport, their favorite animal, their favorite activity to do outside of school, but that speech ends up having no real purpose or substance. Instead, the student simply talks about why they like that thing!

In reality, the important thing to do is recognize what you are passionate about and add some twist of important information or advocacy. Instead of saying, “I am passionate about animals,” it is important to change your frame of mind to, “I am passionate about advocating for the safety and security of animals and eliminating animal abuse.” Look at that second statement!! One, we found more substance to build main points off of, and two, narrowed our topic to discussing the importance of recognizing and eliminating animal abuse. Here, we can turn a once very non-substantial topic into writing a persuasive speech about how college students can participate in volunteering at local animal shelters, advocating for and recognizing animal abuse, or finding ways to eliminate animal abuse. Instead of getting off track and telling our audience how “passionate” we are about animals, we can instead speak to them about how and why we are passionate, without ever having to say the word “passionate.” Think about the ways you can turn a passion into a speech with a clear purpose and end goal!

Need help developing these ideas? Come visit us at the PCC and we can brainstorm with you!

How We See Advocacy in Every Speech

In Valerie’s last blog post, “Our Mentors Advocating for The PCC at the Welcome Back Event!”, she spoke about the importance of advocacy across the Communication Studies Department, as well as within the PCC. Within our current political climate, advocacy has become a focus for many non-profits, community groups, and even individuals. Whether you choose to follow that inner advocate that we all have inside of us, or not, you are constantly advocating. How? By giving speeches.

Here at the PCC, we don’t just “help” students to perfect their speeches, rather we empower them with purpose. By giving your speech purpose, you can create change. You’ll find you become more excited about your speech by implementing some aspect of change, advocacy, importance, and/or substance to your speech.

I was once in a mentoring session, where my mentee showed me her introduction speech to the class. While her speech was great, in terms of direction, but she lacked purpose. As she showed me her PowerPoint and delivered her speech, I could tell she wasn’t excited. The one thing I did realize was that she loved animals, especially her own. After asking her a bunch of questions about herself, she mentioned that she had done a lot of volunteering for animals. A lightbulb went off. She realized that if she connected her volunteer work experience to her own animals, her speech would have purpose! We ended by talking about how she thought it was important that people volunteer, especially in the animal world. Here, what do we see? Advocacy!! She became enormously more excited just by adding that small purpose and advocacy to her speech. She later told me how much better she did on that speech than with the previous one! The power of advocating for something we believe in, we want to fight for, and what follows our personal values is so tremendous. Just by adding a little more personal purpose to your speech, you will amplify your love for public speaking.

Think you need help finding your inner voice and inner advocate? Make an appointment with one of our peer mentors to help you search for that purpose that will make your speech that much better! 

What You Learn In COMM 131 May Actually Be Important…

We always think that our 131 speech class is a one and done thing. It’ll never actually help us in our careers, right? What is the point of taking this class, I’m never going to actually have to give a speech like this except for in this class!! This mentoring that I’m doing is really just a resume builder, it won’t actually be something I can do in real life!

This summer… those thoughts were proven wrong.

I stumbled across a text after a class last semester from an elementary school friend that I hadn’t talked to in years. She said, “Hey, Erin! Text me when you can I have an important thing to ask you.” Never did I think that reconnecting with an old friend would lead me to an internship with a sales consulting and talent management firm, Neuberger and Company.

Going into this internship, I realized that the biggest reason why I got hired was because I had experience in giving speeches. I had clear speech experience, along with mentoring experience. And what is the one thing that they do at Neuberger? Train and coach. A technical and fancy way of saying: teaching and giving speeches. Neuberger focuses on sales training and coaching, which I got to observe every Tuesday morning in their Foundations and Mastery training programs. The consultant always created an outline beforehand and would have to speak and teach for 4 hours. This is what their life is like. Who thought that you could actually have a job where all you do is professionally teach business owners how to grow their business?

My love for education and speech immediately formed together and I realized how special this place was. I learned the importance of being a good communicator, of being able to produce and write an effective outline, of designing a visually pleasing PowerPoint, of having practice and a process around speech making and giving, of the importance of asking for help and getting criticism from your peers/colleagues to improve yourself and your speech, of the realities of speech anxiety and the physical and mental wear and tear it can have on a person, and so much more. While Neuberger means so much more to me than speech giving and making, I quickly realized how truly important it is to learn how to give a good speech and be prepared. We tend to think that you don’t have to know how to make and give a speech in order to be successful in your career, but that is completely untrue, specifically for people looking to work in sales, business management, consulting, business development, amongst a multitude of other things. Most everyone will encounter a sales situation at one point in their life, which means they must be able to effectively and precisely present and close that sale and deal. And what does that involve? Oh, right… giving a speech!

My main purpose here is to tell from a firsthand experience that taking that 131 speech class seriously will do nothing but progress you forward, give you more serious experience, and turn you into a highly desirable candidate. And asking for help in that process will help you even more! Think of the mentors at the Public Communication Center as your colleagues in a work setting– we are here to listen, give advice, and make you the best you can possibly be. Being able to attend networking events, listen to consultants give training and coaching tips, and talk to business owners is something that has expanded the way I think about giving presentations and speeches. That can literally be my career!  Sometimes what you learn in class may actually be important one day… who would’ve thought!

Me at the Baltimore Business Journal’s Biz Mix networking event, where I got to talk to multiple business owners and sales people about Neuberger & Company!

If you want to learn more about my experience at Neuberger, need speech help, or want to talk about the importance of effective communication and speech organization and delivery, make an appointment with me at https://towson.mywconline.com/ or check out ways to make an appointment at the PCC under the Contact Us tab! 

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